So this year I have been mixing full length books with short quick reads to avoid slumps. If I am reading a book that I need a break from I will grab another quick read, almost to cleanse the palette so I can go back and read the other books.
I figured why not try this one out, 66 pages, short and sweet plus it is about one my favorite princess…UGH! This princess was not my favorite. I think if this book had 105 pages it still wouldn’t have been good. I wanted to like it but the repetitive text was annoying. I know your dad is overprotective, I know you work for her dad, I know that you have a forbidden love, I know you want her to be yours, I know…I KNOW ALREADY! Plus for two virgins, he sure as hell knew his way around a woman and when the hymen breaks it hurts, at least for some, but I am pretty sure if you ram that thing like a battering ram into her most intimate area that hasn’t been touched that shit is going to hurt. They also spent a good portion of their first time heavy-lidded, not even sure how they could see each other. She also could feel his heavy weighted balls….What? The story was them having sex, like seriously, descriptive sex. Some will enjoy that, I enjoy sex but not in an entire book, almost every page, I also like story with my sex. Not like we tell stories to each other but you know what I mean, I need to have some reason to be reading it!
Overall this was an erotica that just didn’t deliver for me, while some might not mind the sex with no story, I do prefer mine with one. Also, seriously, one Epilogue is enough, we didn’t need 5. I don’t usually mention this but this book needs to be edited one more time, I am not a great sentence maker but I am also not selling a book.
That’s my opinion and I am sticking to it, don’t @ me! 🙂
Thanks for stopping by to check out my review.
Have a great day and Happy Reading!
Yep, I need the story. What a shame, I do love a retelling.
I love them, stories are very important in books, this one didn’t have it lol
Oh man! I thought this might be fun, but yeah, I do need a plot.
I did too, I starting getting bummed after like the second chapter when I realized this book was filled with repetitive text.
Hate when I get one that sounds good but then is ugh.
I thought Snow white and huntsman going to be sexy. I didn’t realize it was set in modern day and I just didn’t read well. I was sad.